FIFA 15 and 16
FIFA is a great soccer/football game. It is filled with excitement and a little bit of anger (only if you lose or you did not get a goal). But partly it is very fun because on Saturday I went to my friend Arnav's house and he had FIFA 15 on his PS4. FIFA 16 is going to be realised on 22nd September 2015. FIFA 15 is an association football simulation video game developed by EA Canada and published by Electronic Arts. FIFA stands for Federation International de Football Association.
hello rahi
ReplyDeletea video game, you are creative with blogs like these
is your blog long enough? because you are a year 6. (6-9 sentence long)
its nice to play this game
Justin V
Well done Rahi like the way you chosed your favourite sport
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Ms W
Hi Rahi,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, it is great to see you write about something that interests you. Secondly, you did a great job explaining it because this was all new info to me but I understand it because you clearly described it. I would like to see you extend yourself in your writing. I feel like you always do the minimum of what is asked. You are a good writing and with more practice, and longer posts, you will be great. Nice comment Justin- remember to punctuate:)
Ms W