Monday, September 14, 2015

Summer

Summer 

Sunshine shines across the window
Happiness has started
Flowers show pretty colours 
That is Summer

I did this because I really love summer. Summer is a time to play outside and get some outing (Thats what my mum tells me to do). I like summer because it dose not rain that much in summer. Thats why I love summer and thats why I wrote a poem about Summer.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rahi
    This is a good topic for poems
    I don't think that this is considered a poem because this isn't long enough and what else do you like about summer?
    I like summer too and I like it when it does not rain
    Justin V

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  2. Hi Rahi (and Justin)
    Nice little poem you have here. The seasons do indeed make us feel different things so a poem is a great way to write about this. Your mum sounds like a wise person too - play out side in the warmth!
    Ms W

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